Subject: Today! Call #1 of April: 100-Word Critiques ☕️

Today: Call #1
100-Word Critiques 
Hi Friend,

How are you? Hope you're doing well and staying safe. If you need anything, please let me know.

We have a few new features coming:
  • Weekly writing sprints.

    Wednesdays, 11am PT/12pm CT/1pm ET, starts April 1st and lasts 1 hour.

    Gather on Zoom to check in then write. Then check in at the end of the hour. Hosted by Ann Shannon.


    Details posted in Fellowship of the Pen FB group:
    https://www.facebook.com/events/1066672330377750/

  • Virtual Writer’s Café, also hosted by Ann Shannon. Thanks Ann!

    The Virtual Writer’s Café will meet twice weekly Tuesday, 7-8 pm ET / 4-5pm PT and Thursday, 3-4pm ET / 12-1pm PT on Facebook, in the Fellowship of the Pen group and on Twitter with the hashtag #VirtualWritersCafe.

    More details coming soon!
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I look forward to reconnecting with you today for Call #1, the first group of the month.

Tuesday, April 2, 2020 at 
5:30pm PT / 7:30pm CT / 8:30pm ET

Calls last up to 90 minutes.

Please RSVP. Thanks! The call will be recorded.

** Reminder: Send in up to 100-words ahead of time. Details below. **

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Our Focus: 100-word critiques on narrative and/or dialogue

In our call, we'll go over 100-word critiques with/or narrative -- could be setting, inner thought, action, etc., AND/OR dialogue.

Optional: As we do we'll draft up some principles to keep in mind as you write and edit.

For example: What makes readers care about your characters?

Use these 5 questions to see if you have these 5 emotional components in each scene:
  • Is your character like us? Can we recognize ourself in them?
  • Do we feel pity for them for a misfortune they've suffered or are suffering?
  • Do they care for someone other than themselves and show that caring?
  • Do we admire them because they've done something or are doing something heroic, funny, skilled, or clever?
  • Do we know why they struggle after their goal? Do we know what's at stake for them?

(From "Emotional Core: Empathy Formula" in the Plan Your Novel course here:


We'll also:

-- do our Metaphor Check-ins

-- share announcements and next steps

Bring your questions to the call.


We'll also have a good time connecting!

Thanks!

PS. If you can't attend, you can still send in your questions, though you must be present for us to critique your work.



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HOW TO JOIN THE CALL

Join from PC, Mac, Linux, iOS or Android:

Link: https://zoom.us/j/781707967


All calls are on Zoom: Meeting ID: 781 707 967

Or join by phone:

+1 646 558 8656 (US Toll) or +1 408 638 0968 (US Toll)

International numbers available:
https://zoom.us/zoomconference?m=BEVL5Bd5w3SrNCUf7d_dlhZEBFotLYVS

*The call will be recorded if you can't make it live.

Please RSVP for the call. Thanks!


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EVENT ANNOUNCEMENTS: MARK YOUR CALENDAR!

Reminder: Weekly Peer Critique Group: 
     Weekly on Mondays on Zoom
     -- 5pm PT/8pm ET
     Zoom Meeting: https://zoom.us/j/842204153

New! Weekly Writing Sprints for all students via Fellowship of the Pen community:
     Weekly on Wednesdays on Zoom,
     -- 11am PT/1pm ET (1 hour)
     Zoom meeting: https://zoom.us/j/696703378

60-Day Novel course starts April 1st!
     Join for free here: special program benefit to you!


    -- This course comes with a special webinar on how to generate ideas on Tuesday, March 31, 5:30pm PT/8:30pm ET (I'll send reminders for that as part of the 60-Day Novel course.)

Next Week: Group Call #1 of April 
On Thursday, April 2, 5:30pm PT/8:30pm ET


Fellowship of the Pen Student Community Q&A Call
Wednesday, April 15, 3pm PT/6pm ET

Group Call #2 of April
On Thursday, April 16, 5:30pm PT/8:30pm ET

Group Call #3 of April
On Tuesday, April 28, 9am PT/12pm ET

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Your Group Benefits

HOME STUDY COURSES: As a member of the group coaching program, You have access to all the home study courses here:



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Q: Where are the replays?

A: ALL GROUP REPLAYS: All the group calls are stored here:


JAN-FEB-MAR 2020 REPLAYS START HERE



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QUESTIONS?


Let me know if you have any questions, request for clarifications, or suggestions. Business hours are generally: M-F, 9-5pm PT.

We're here to help you craft a successful and sustainable career as a novelist, so that you can inspire the world with your stories.


Thanks!

Hugs and love ♥ from us! 

Beth & Ezra
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