Subject: This Week: Call #2 for November, 100-word critiques + 💖

This week: Call #2 for November
100-word critiques + 💖
Hi Friend,

I look forward to reconnecting with you Thursday for Call #2, the second group call of the month.

Thursday, Nov. 19, 2020 at 
5:30pm PT / 8:30pm ET

Calls last up to 90 minutes.

Please RSVP. Thanks! The call will be recorded.

** Please send in your 100-words by Wednesday night. *


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Our Focus: Powerful Sentences

Let's talk about how to craft powerful sentences to bring your story forward, focusing on three main structures:
  • the cumulative sentence
  • the "absolute" phrase
  • short vs. long sentences
Bring your questions and curiosity ...

We'll also go over your 100-word critiques.

You can send narrative, dialogue, a combo of the two, a book blurb, outline, or even a cover mockup.

Optional: As we do we'll draft up some principles to keep in mind as you write and edit.


And we'll also:

-- do our Metaphor Check-ins & Good News

-- share next steps and announcements

Bring your questions to the call.


We'll also have a good time connecting!

Thanks!

PS. If you can't attend, you can still send in your questions, though you must be present for us to critique your work.



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HOW TO JOIN THE ZOOM CALL

Check for updates, in case Zoom has some. :)

Join from PC, Mac, Linux, iOS or Android:

Link: 


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Password: 557463

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*The call will be recorded if you can't make it live.

Please RSVP for the call. Thanks!

Want Google Calendar Reminders for these calls?

I can add you to a Google Calendar reminder for this event, if you haven't already been added. Just send reply and tell me your best email for that and voilà -- I'll get you set up.


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EVENT ANNOUNCEMENTS: MARK YOUR CALENDAR!

Reminder: Weekly Peer Critique Group: 
     Weekly on Mondays on Zoom
     -- 5pm PT/8pm ET
     Zoom Meeting: https://zoom.us/j/842204153?pwd=Sm9KSm1BRWRFTmRHdEpYZENZZmJtZz09

Weekly Writing Sprints for all students via Fellowship of the Pen community:
     Weekly on Wednesdays on Zoom,
     -- 11am PT/1pm ET (1 hour)
And 2 Sundays a month: the 2nd and 4th
  
Zoom meeting: https://us02web.zoom.us/j/696703378?pwd=SUFsenpwdDNkc3R3SlBia01tSDJFdz09

Insider Hour for All Students 
Fellowship of the Pen
Wednesday, November 18, 3pm PT/6pm ET
-- Details on Facebook: 


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Your Group Benefits

HOME STUDY COURSES: As a member of the group coaching program, You have access to all the home study courses here:



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Q: Where are the replays?

A: ALL GROUP REPLAYS: All the group calls are stored here:


2020 REPLAYS START HERE



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QUESTIONS?


Let me know if you have any questions, request for clarifications, or suggestions. Business hours are generally: M-F, 9-5pm PT.

We're here to help you craft a successful and sustainable career as a novelist, so that you can inspire the world with your stories.


Thanks!

Hugs and love â™¥ from us! 

Beth & Ezra
Bring Your Questions & Your Curiosity to the Group! 

We're Here to Support Your Success.
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