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FaithWriters 
November  2016 
Make it your goal to be a better writer for Jesus!
Make it your goal to be a better writer for Jesus!
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News & Information for the Write Brained Christian" 
Devotional & Newest Member E-books Included

Congratulations Page Turner Winners!

The two champions will each receive:

1. A fabulous cash prize of $250 (US);
2. The offer of traditional publication of their winning manuscript by Breath of Fresh Air Press;
3. Free publicity and marketing of their book on all FaithWriters' sites for twelve months following publication; and
4. A special Page Turner Champion award plaque.

2016 Winners listed HERE!
The Challenge WILL Improve Your Writing!
Masters Level Quarterly Challenge WINNER! 

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: GATHERING (07/14/16)
TITLE: Kaleidoscope
By Laury Hubrich
07/20/16


The broadcaster drones on. My phone pings with people’s opinions about the latest news story.

Terrorism.
Racial tension.
Politics.

The world is falling apart.
I can’t take any more.
From bad to worse to horrible.
My heart is heavy.

I do the unthinkable:
Shut the television off.
Silence the phone.

I’m drawn to the backyard.
I stretch out in my hammock.

Just in time, I’m rewarded with a dazzling display of colors splashed across the western sky. The sun then nestles in just so, on the pre-harvest field of corn. While there, it calls each beam home by name.

Ray after ray.

Resilient tendrils begrudgingly release their hold. Soon they gather one last time for a most spectacular sunset of orange, edged in blue and purple.

After the show, the sun dips below the corn. I almost miss its playful wink when it pops back up one last time to say goodbye until tomorrow. I close my eyes, trying to forget the sorrow.

Something lands on my nose.

Cross-eyed, I see a bug blink its tiny light. I reach up to catch...continue reading and leave a comment


Laury is wife, mother of three and a long time member of FaithWriters. She is an avid reader and loves to write what God puts on my heart. Find more of her articles and contact her HERE.
Another Great Way to Improve The Critique Circle

Fellow Members Need Your Help. 
Providing critiques for fellow members is of great encouragement to them. It is also the perfect way to improve your own writing skill. 

Tips on Giving Critiques
Critiquing the work of others requires balance. Being too nice will not help your fellow writers develop their work; being too harsh can crush a writer’s ego (particularly new writers, who tend to be shy about sharing their work). How can you achieve the right balance? Here are some tips:

Take care to point out both what works, and what doesn’t. If you’re new to critiquing, a good hint would be to point out one thing you like (a phrase, a description, an idea) for each thing that bothered you.

Whenever possible, be specific when pointing out things that you didn’t like (don’t just say “I didn’t like this part” or “I’d cut that,” say “I didn’t like this part because…” or “I’d cut that because…”).

Try to offer suggestions when you think a change is needed. Suggestions, even to the point of an offered rewording, can be very helpful; even if the suggestion isn’t exactly right for the author to use, he or she may get a good idea from it, or at least a better understanding of the point you are trying to make.

Be honest and direct, but in a polite and caring way. Holding back your feelings about a piece because you’re afraid to share your thoughts isn’t going to help anyone. Just be mindful of how you share your opinions!

We Also Need Your Article to Critique!
Members and paid editors provide the critiques in the circle. We just added two more paid editors to the Critique Circle and they are telling us they need more submissions. You can even submit your judged Challenge entries to the circle.

"I have a few, very few, trusted friends who will edit me with a scowl. Most people want you to feel good so they give you compliments about your writing, and these don’t help at all (except emotionally). Really, you need some grouches to edit your work." Philip Yancey in a FaithWriters interview.

This is a real chance to help others and receive some very constructive and private critiques of your writing

Go HERE!

Support FaithWriters and Spread the Gospel!

Fishers of Men in Over 230 Countries
Together We Spread the Gospel on The Net

There is only one unforgiveble sin, the sin of unbelief. Those who believe will trust God and are led to the safety of Jesus. Those who do not believe will be like those who did not enter the Ark and were lost. 

The enemy is alive and rampant online with a word of unbelief. A message of hate for Christianity and Jesus. A message that is leading countless children to embrace unbelief. (Free book HERE you can review with your kids on the objective evidence for Christianity.)The number of atheist sites and organizations posting online is increasing rapidly. If you go no further in this message, at least go HERE and see for yourself the growing number of purveyors of unbelief online. Here is a short video we would like you to watch also. 

Not all of us can go around the world as missionaries in person, but we can reach the world online. We can even reach many places missionaries cannot go in person. The world needs sites like FaithWriters, prepared Christian authors and as many Christian articles and books that point to Jesus as possible. The web especially needs your Bible studies, apologetic articles, calls to salvation, nonfiction and fiction articles and books leading people to Jesus. Together we attract lost people from all over the world who need Jesus along with believers who need their minds renewed and encouraged. God has given us a great opportunity to reach many people who may have never heard about Jesus. The image above marks the location of our visitors. 

Numerous people from around the world have accepted Jesus as Lord and Savior directly through FaithWriters. We contact every person who leaves an email address, and provide them with more information. Sometimes we correspond with them several times. We even offer to place them in contact with another believer (FaithWriters member) in their country. Consider how much time people --- especially kids --- spend on the internet these days. Watch this two minute video from Kimberly on how she found God on the internet.

A few unedited emails from people who have accepted Jesus on the site.

1) Type of prayer : first time prayer
Country : Algeria - Please leave a comment. : I JESUS PRAY TODAY MAKE EVERYTHING BETTER I USED TO BE THIEF CRIMINAL IDENTITY SCAM BUT NOW LIFE IS BETTER UNDER JESUS CHRIST MY LORD SAVIOR.
Your work occupation : Other Religious background : Muslim

2) Hi my name is Collin I live in Utah heber I know that we are n the last days and I want to be saved so please I need help I've been going to site to site I'm tired of going home from school a sinner I'm stressed with all my homework I cry more than ever sometimes I need Jesus. (This message was obviously from a young boy)

3) I felt the the holyspirit lead me to you and that God's message of love drew me here.

4) I want Jesus to be the number in my life.

5) I'm saved from sin and I've rededicated my life to HIM who owns me. I'm now free from lies, exam malpractice etc. Pray for me to believe that indeed "It is finished "

6) I accepted Jesus as Lord and Need A Bible. (We sent Roger a Bible.)


7) I have accepted Jesus and prayer not continue to commit sin any more. Matthew

8) Recently had a deputy police chief from a major city accept Jesus on the site. He is responsible for over 1,500 officers and staff and could be a big influence for Jesus. Please pray for J. Ramar.

For quite some time now, FaithWriters has been experiencing increasing expenses and declining income.  The current trend is not good. The vast majority (99%) of our members are free members, even though our membership is only pennies per day. Our main ongoing expenses come from administering the Challenge, other tools that help writers improve and site maintenance. We have regular and growing expenses including a hefty current expense to convert our large site to a mobile responsive site. 

We are asking you to help by upgrading (Gold $5.95 or Platinum $10.95 per month) and supporting the spread of the gospel and the growth of Christian writers on FaithWriters.  As followers of Jesus, we are making a difference by publishing the truth of Jesus. Men and women from over 230 countries (View Countries Here) are drawn to the FaithWriters by the various articles on the end of our virtual fishing pole. Often our visitors are from closed countries to the message of Christ and they have no other way to learn about Jesus. They are able to learn from our evangelism site and the sister-sites to which we have provided links, including sites with in-depth information in their native language.

You can also upgrade and designate it as a payment to sponsor new writers. We have many people from around the world who do not have the funds to upgrade. In some countries, even if they do have the funds, no payment processor will handle online payments due to online corruption in their country. 

Upgrade or sponsor a person HERE. Just click on Gold or Platinum. As a current member you just need to do the PayPal portion. You do not need to do a new profile. When we see your PayPal come through, we will credit your account. If you wish to sponsor a member, email us after you do the PayPal and tell us your payment was for this purpose.  
  
We need to keep telling people about Jesus! Will you help us?

We wish you many blessings in Christ and thank you for your support!  Michael & Bea Edwards and everyone at FaithWriters

In supporting FaithWriters you gain access to more tools to improve your writing, foster the growth of new Christian writers and spread the gospel in over 230 countries online. All for pennies per day.
New Release!
Mixed Blessings—Genre-lly Speaking
Featuring top Challenge articles from 65 FaithWriters members.

There is something for every reader in a Mixed Blessings book, and this volume is no exception. Mixed Blessings—Genre-lly Speaking is filled to the brim with fun, encouragement, food for thought, and inspiration. You may find yourself chuckling one moment, and shedding a tear the next. In fact, it is the perfect mix of blessings for your daily reading enjoyment.

Keep this book with you wherever you go for a variety-packed pick-me-up in the midst of your busy day, but be warned. Reading a Mixed Blessings book is like eating peanuts. You just can’t stop at one.


AVAILABLE FOR SALE SEPTEMBER 11 - Breath of Fresh Air Press - Learn more HERE.
Platinum Member Books 
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Promote your Christian book on FaithWriters and you will helping to support our mission to grow Christian writers and spread the gospel in over 230 countries online. You will not find more exposure for your Christian book anywhere at this price.

Watch this short video HERE.
NEVER MISS THAT PERFECT CHALLENGE TOPIC AGAIN.  
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Have you submitted a devotional for publication? 

Great Multitude Daily Bible Devotional 
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Victory in Jesus - Toni Babcock

"There hath no temptation taken you but such as is common to man: but God is faithful, who will not suffer you to be tempted above that ye are able; but will with the temptation also make a way of escape that ye may be able to bear it," ( I Corinthians 10:13 KJV).

In his letter to the Corinthians, Paul's declaration of God's faithfulness to "make a way of escape" pretty much blows the cover off the old excuse "The devil made me do it". The truth is, as believers in the power of the gospel, the devil has no power to make us do anything. His power has been broken. Now because of Jesus, we finally have the hope of attaining the kind of life the Lord Jesus Himself calls us to live. The question is, do we believe it enough to use God's escape hatch when faced with temptation? This would involve calling upon God for deliverance, claiming the promises in His Word, and seeking the help of fellow believers who can pray with us and for us, bringing support when necessary.

By nature we are still sinners who slip and slide and sometimes fall flat on our face. But it is possible to turn the self-condemnation of continually living in defeat into the victory of living in Jesus and the promises of God's Word. Isn't that part of what salvation is all about? Isn't it more than just making sure we are going to Heaven by and by? Yes, it is learning to live in the victory of Jesus to the glory of God now - here on Earth. It's being saved not only from the penalty of our sins (praise God for that) - but from the power.   


Today's writer and proud grandmother lives in Minnesota. Contact Toni HERE.

Help us spread the good news of Jesus around the world. The FaithWriters devotional is on thousands of websites HERE , plus thousands go out by email and Twitter daily. They are also published about 90 days after FaithWriters on IDisciple HERE Members are encouraged to submit an edited devotional for publication HERE. Submissions are a maximum of 300 words, helping you learn to write to topic and word count. You never know how your writing may inspire a brother or sister in Christ or impact a lost soul. 

Watch this short video that will show you a few of the unique websites the devotional is currently on. Sites like the Church of Scotland and the Los Angeles police wives association. 
Support Fellow Christian Authors

Read Great Christian Books Free In Exchange For A Review
Many already have multiple five star reviews on Amazon. 

Today's Featured Book:
Attack at Shark Bay A Riwaka Gang Adventure - Denis Shuker

This is a high-octane, rip-roaring adventure story for kids eight years and up.

Find today's book HERE. Learn how the program works HERE.

We have some great books for you to read for free! 

This is just one example of over 40 books you can read for free in exchange for a review. Many others have multiple five star reviews too. One book is running just below five stars with 95 reviews and it is listed in the top five books of its two categories. Another with over 30 reviews is running close to five stars and was honored as the book of the year by a major theological website. Another has over 20 reviews and is running almost five stars. Read one of these or one that has just joined the program and desperately needs reviews.

These are all free to read for you while others pay full price on Amazon. Plus you receive the bonus of helping a fellow believer and FaithWriters member. It takes reviews to sell books these days and other members really appreciate your help.

Go HERE to find other great books to read for FREE for a REVIEW.

Hurry and choose one while they are still free to read! The authors can take their books out of this program at any moment.

Have you written a book and need reviews? Learn about submitting your book to this program HERE.
Please Pardon the Work - Mobile Responsive Conversion - Patience Requested

FaithWriters will soon begin a gradual conversion to a mobile responsive site. Much of the hard work of individual page conversion has already been done on a duplicate site designed for development. We will gradually be replacing the current site pages with pages that will automatically re-size based on your viewing device. This has been a very large and time consuming project due to the size of the site. You should not notice any interruption on a normal sized laptop or larger screen. Hopefully you will not even notice the gradual change on mobile devices. However, there could be issues at times with links not working and misaligned formatting on pages. If you are using a mobile device, for a time you may experience pages that respond correctly to your device size and other pages that display in their current full size format. A gradual transition will avoid any huge issues that might occur by transitioning all at once.

We thank you for your patience. 

Easily Increase the Readership of Your Articles

We are asking you to increase your readership, spread the good news and help FaithWriters by using the FaceBook share button when you publish articles.  It is very easy to do, just watch this short video. 

Tweeting your articles and liking them on FaceBook will help too.
Trials and Triumphs II 
Rooted and Grounded in Love

The Powerful and Personal Testimonies of Fifty FaithWriters Members

Support fellow members by getting a copy of this inspiring book, which contains Fifty unique true stories from members around the world. These testimonies are powerful and encouraging. Makes a great book to leave on your coffee table for a conversation starter. Check it out HERE! 

Support fellow members by purchasing your copy today. NOW AVAILABLE IN AN E-BOOK!

The first Trials and Triumphs can be found HERE.
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Jan's Lessons Are Now Indexed so You Can Easily Find What You Need





We love Jan's courses. "I absolutely must add to these comments my own deep appreciation for the hard work you put in for us week by week. You enable people to grow and find true expression for their faith in the will of God. I've learnt so much already in such a short time, and that's because of your great advice and loving direction. Trace P.
Ann's Bite Sized Grammar Lessons HERE.


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you or by praying for them!

Don't Skimp on the Editing 
Hire a FaithWriters Approved Editor Today!

Jan Ackerson is one of several editors offering editing services. 

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  This Months FaithWriters Great Reads Selection
 We have some excellent writers and many topics to choose from at FaithWriters. Bless your fellow members by reading one or more of their books occasionally. Just imagine how you would feel if they did the same for you. Many of these books have multiple five-star reviews on Amazon. 






Books added in the last month as described by each author.






Biblical studies

Made in the Image of God: Understanding the Nature of God and Mankind in a Changing World (Revised Edition)
Reid Ashbaucher
Your Price: $6.99
Made in the Image of God is a book that provides key concepts for understanding the nature and personhood of God and mankind, while revealing the reality of how we as human beings relate to God physically, emotionally and spiritually in a metaphysical way, both now and in the future.
from Amazon.com!

Family matters

The Real Rule Book For Every Father
Oladapo Alao-Odeleye
Your Price: $2.99
Fathering by the world’s standards is different from that of Christian homes. A secular father wants his children to come out with good grades, good jobs, great marriages, and be wealthy. A Christian father who is fully conscious of who he is in the world will want to build up children who make God their first priority in life and other things secondary.
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Available in more formats from:
Amazon.com

Fiction

The Seventieth Week
Graham Keet
Your Price: $11.39
Devastating end-time events - intrigue and romance as prophecy is fulfilled.
The world is on the brink of war, and even nature has turned against mankind - can anything stand in the way of the most ruthless man who ever lived?
from Amazon.com!

Non-Fiction


Beautiful Dreamer: Dreams - God's Personal Navigation System
Teresa Odden
Your Price: $7.99
There is beauty in your dreams. Have you ever wondered if God speaks to you through your dreams? Do you ask whether your dreams are significant for your life? Beautiful Dreamer is an important book for anyone who has ever sought for an answer to these questions.
from Amazon.com!

Poetry

Believe
Wesley Hesketh
Your Price: $6.99
I am 74. I believe in music. I was raised in the Bay Area in Ca now I live in Oregon outside Portland.
I believe that WE are forever. The body is only one part of us that God is omnipotent. We are connected to the power of the universe, which is God. He is my companion. CLICK SMASHWORDS LINK TO BUY
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Available in more formats from:
Smashwords.com


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